Wednesday, September 12, 2007

9/11/01 Prompt (4)

It was Sep 11th 2001 going to school on a cold day with some mist in the sky. Today seemed strange everybody looked sad as I slowly walked in the quad. The first thing that comes to mind was “what happened?” so one of my friends said something happened in New York specifically in the world trade center. The twin towers were just shot down by high jacked planes. Strange feelings that came to mind like who, what and why. At the same time I felt very confused but sad for the people that were in New York when it happened.

America should not forget this tragic incident and should be printed in all American history books as a reminder. To all the people that Bin laden connote be trusted and the reason why history books were made was to not repeat history in the first place. So this will go in the books as when we were attacked by terrorist.

There are lots of bad people out there and bin laden was one of them. America should not forgive bin laden but to have peace with people in Iraq and Afghanistan. The people had nothing to do with it; bin laden was the only one behind it. If this situation was negotiated by Christians, there would be a very big opposition then what America would do.

1 comment:

The Story of Me said...

You have some good thoughts. Unfortunately they are being overshadowed by mechanical faults. You have many proper nouns which need to be capital. You also have some fautly sentence structure. I would suggest you print the post out and revise it on paper. If you would like, I can go over it with you. Please make the necessary corrections.